Good morning dear teachers,
I am very glad to be here for your interview. My name is *****come from Shanghai.
Generally speaking, I’m a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I’ll try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. I like recitation, reading books and writing compositions. When I was a pupil, I found broadcast very interesting, so I learned to practice speaking Chinese very hard. Also English is my favorite. I often go to the English corner to practice my oral English with friends.
I have a dream, to spread English throughout China and Chinese throughout the world. I want to share this dream with all my friends all over the world.


Believe me, I can do it and let’s make miracles together! Let’s just do it.
Ok, that is all, Thank you for your attention.

晕，你考的是英文播音专业啊，太牛了

过奖了您...

是你自己写的么？

呵呵，JUST DO IT。

今年的考试?

希望你考上啊!!!

啊．小朋友．我才看到．你自己写的吗．太随便点了吧．是不是有语法错误．有点中国试英语的味道

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原帖由 思念 于 2007-8-5 02:11 发表
啊．小朋友．我才看到．你自己写的吗．太随便点了吧．是不是有语法错误．有点中国试英语的味道

哪儿有语法错误啊?

Your name is ***** ,R U from Japan or some other countries?
Ｉ　ａｍ　ｔｅａｃｈｅｒ＂黑山老姚＂，Ｕ　Ｒ very good ,but  sorry,we need a good boy , and we got the right one already, it's name is "黑山老姚".

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原帖由 思念 于 2007-8-5 02:11 发表
啊．小朋友．我才看到．你自己写的吗．太随便点了吧．是不是有语法错误．有点中国试英语的味道

深表同意，而且还加上了广告语“just do it”，回去再润色一下更好！

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原帖由 河边 于 2007-8-5 03:09 发表

哪儿有语法错误啊?

自己看啊
还不如让老师帮你攒一篇

something just feel not right...not very native...kinda Chinglish...

外国人说话不以teacher做称呼……

最后那句thank you for your attention实在是……

原来是个小孩子,写成这样,不错了,已经.鼓励.

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原帖由 我在长大 于 2007-8-20 20:23 发表
原来是个小孩子,写成这样,不错了,已经.鼓励.

同1同1，加油加油！我这么大了还没有接到过这样的面试呢！

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原帖由 思念 于 2007-8-5 02:11 发表
啊．小朋友．我才看到．你自己写的吗．太随便点了吧．是不是有语法错误．有点中国试英语的味道

Do something for her please. I think your English is much better.