对徐静蕾的剧本[宫里的日子]若干修改建议

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<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">对徐静蕾的剧本<span lang="EN-US">[</span>宫里的日子<span lang="EN-US">]</span>的若干修改建议<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">我没看过徐静蕾<span lang="EN-US">[</span>宫里的日子<span lang="EN-US">]</span>的剧本，只知道剧本是描述武则天在宫里的生活。很久前我也曾写过一个剧本<span lang="EN-US">[</span>武则天<span lang="EN-US">](</span>又名：无字碑<span lang="EN-US">)<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">只是把我剧本中的几个可能作为参考的剧情予以推荐，以作参考：<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 9.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-family: 新宋体;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">1、<span style="FONT: 7pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">&nbsp; </span></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">曾经在网上看到过徐静蕾的书法<span lang="EN-US">--</span>王羲之<span lang="EN-US">[</span>兰亭序<span lang="EN-US">]</span>的摹本，还真有点大家的风范，大家都知道唐太宗李世民酷爱书法，特别是王羲之的书法<span lang="EN-US">[</span>兰亭序<span lang="EN-US">]</span>视为挚爱，传说陪葬昭陵。我们可以增加一个剧情，李世民在观摩王羲之<span lang="EN-US">[</span>兰亭序<span lang="EN-US">]</span>情不自禁的夸出口，作为宫女的武照<span lang="EN-US">(</span>以后的武则天，徐静蕾饰<span lang="EN-US">)</span>正好当天在旁服侍。当天唐太宗一时兴起，破格让服饰的宫女一起观摩。随即问起宫女是否识字，武照当即挥笔临摹<span lang="EN-US">[</span>兰亭序<span lang="EN-US">](</span>就是徐静蕾放在她爸爸公司的那幅<span lang="EN-US">)</span>，唐太宗惊讶之余，不由赞叹，当即赐号“媚娘”。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -0.1pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.9pt; TEXT-INDENT: -18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 17.9pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-family: 新宋体;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">2、</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 新宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">武媚娘废除了睿宗李旦登上帝位，庐陵王李显<span lang="EN-US">(</span>中宗<span lang="EN-US">)</span>进宫请安，在上官婉儿的唆使下问武则天<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGH

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