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[原创]凌乱的羽毛在飞(外三首)―――写给徐静蕾

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发表于 2006-7-9 17:43 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 凌乱的羽毛在飞(外三首)</strong></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; ―――素描徐静蕾</strong></span></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这是一个季节的伤口</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">寂寞的天空,被一只飞过的鸟惊动</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">还有那哕哕舞动的翅膀,收藏了</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">草长鹰飞的记忆</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">光阴在忧郁的路上,洗涤飞翔的往事</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">日子纯粹如宣纸一样</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">吸附了绿色,吸附了伤口的血液</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New
沙发
发表于 2006-7-9 19:29 | 只看该作者
<p>虽然理解不是很深,但文字很美,如老徐本人!!!!</p><p>希望楼主创作出更多的佳品!</p>
板凳
发表于 2006-7-9 21:56 | 只看该作者
好喜欢老徐那内敛的气质
地板
发表于 2006-7-10 02:01 | 只看该作者
<p><font face="黑体" color="#999999">永远都会支持原创~~</font></p><p><font color="#888888">&nbsp; 就是要靠文字锁住&nbsp; 不然会跑掉</font></p>
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发表于 2006-7-10 02:10 | 只看该作者
喜欢静蕾每天都那么淑女.
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发表于 2006-7-10 22:15 | 只看该作者
经典,,,太经典了
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发表于 2006-7-12 00:54 | 只看该作者
<p>天然去雕饰,清水出芙蓉。</p><p></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-7-18 05:58 | 只看该作者
还希望大家补充。
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发表于 2006-7-18 09:48 | 只看该作者
作者原创,很棒。但个人不是太喜欢这样的风格,如果文字可以再自然一点就好了,读着可以很轻松,但又有深度。
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发表于 2006-7-18 10:20 | 只看该作者
支持~!~~
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发表于 2006-7-19 23:52 | 只看该作者
喜欢诗和老徐
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发表于 2006-7-20 02:01 | 只看该作者
呵呵楼主真厉害.[em04]
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发表于 2006-7-20 02:27 | 只看该作者
<p>是不是所有的故事都可以从来,那么人呢!</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-11-21 07:39 | 只看该作者
<p>路过.</p><p>顶.</p>
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发表于 2006-11-22 00:02 | 只看该作者
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">冰清玉洁的锈锁</span><span lang="EN-US">
                                <p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; <p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">把日子收拾干净</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">放进橱柜里,也包括寂寥的心情</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">曾经被编织成毛衣的彩色毛线</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">储存了一份纯粹的伤逝</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">只是一把锁,在外壳上</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">流淌了心脏里疲惫的锈水</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 116.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; <p><font color="#ff00ff">啊哈好诗好诗</font></p></font></span></p><p><font color="#ff00ff">啊哈好诗好诗</font></p>
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